LO4: Analysis and applications of findings Pt2

 I gathered feedback from my teacher, and she suggested the following improvements to fix my ident:

Ident 1:

. The CBBC Logo needs to be on the correct side of the screen

. The shots needs to be shortened down to fit 30 seconds

. The Characters names should be seen on the screen and focused onto the scientist

. Shots will need to be re-filmed when doing the experiments

. End of the ident should match in time with the ending

Ident 2:

. Shots needs to be re filmed to make sense of the ident

. CBBC Logo needs to be corrected and put on the right hand of the screen

. music needs to be added on to the ident

. Ident shots needs to fit into 30 seconds and certain scenes need to be taken out

. Why is Millie making eye contact at the camera Angle

. Shots needs to be smooth and not positioned at an awkward angle